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 eNtranceAsexit
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 this is where i post my songs that need to be worked on, and you tell me what you think I should do! 
#559897 - 05/30/11 09:42 PM (13 years, 6 months ago) |
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first song.
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Re: this is where i post my songs that need to be worked on, and you tell me what you think I should do! [Re: eNtranceAsexit]
#559907 - 05/30/11 09:51 PM (13 years, 6 months ago) |
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second song! oh my! 
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Re: this is where i post my songs that need to be worked on, and you tell me what you think I should do! [Re: eNtranceAsexit]
#559947 - 05/30/11 10:15 PM (13 years, 6 months ago) |
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no takers yet? dang me.
number three... it's like... the end boss of a game... it's repetitive, and probably annoying after awhile... tell me YOUR IDEASSasssss
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Re: this is where i post my songs that need to be worked on, and you tell me what you think I should do! [Re: eNtranceAsexit]
#559956 - 05/30/11 10:34 PM (13 years, 6 months ago) |
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here is number four... i made this just now in like 15 minutes...
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Re: this is where i post my songs that need to be worked on, and you tell me what you think I should do! (moved) [Re: eNtranceAsexit]
#559958 - 05/30/11 10:46 PM (13 years, 6 months ago) |
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 This thread was moved from The Smoke Lounge.
Reason:
Music related thread.
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Re: this is where i post my songs that need to be worked on, and you tell me what you think I should do! (moved) [Re: Stoneth]
#559960 - 05/30/11 10:51 PM (13 years, 6 months ago) |
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sorry, they should have guitars or throaty vocals about weed, sorry.
 almost an infraction, damn... i guess we are just all hippies, here.
want some soup?
Edited by eNtranceAsexit (05/30/11 10:53 PM)
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Re: this is where i post my songs that need to be worked on, and you tell me what you think I should do! (moved) [Re: eNtranceAsexit]
#559984 - 05/30/11 11:33 PM (13 years, 6 months ago) |
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Dude, I really really liked the first one which is highly unusual because it's NOT my genre of music in the slightest. Very very nice vibe to it that I really enjoyed. I think it needs to go somewhere though. It feels great and I dig the groove and then it just keeps wanking away at the same beat and stuff... build it up, reach a climax, and then bring it back down to where it was so the song feels like it has some sort of direction.
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Re: this is where i post my songs that need to be worked on, and you tell me what you think I should do! (moved) [Re: Harry_Ba11sach]
#559988 - 05/30/11 11:36 PM (13 years, 6 months ago) |
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yeah, i finished making it pretty abruptly... i suppose it can do with the extra tracking at the end and wind it down... then maybe add a little melancholy deconstruction... make it even more frosty and give it some more texture and slower vibe to the end.
thanks for your imput 
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